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by <<kdbutt: >></b></font><br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><br>Kevin D. Butt<br>SCSI Architect, Tape Firmware, CAMSS<br>T10 Standards<br>MS 6TYA, 9000 S. Rita Rd., Tucson, AZ 85744<br>Tel: 520-799-5280<br>Fax: 520-799-2723 (T/L:321)<br>Email address: kdbutt@us.ibm.com<br></font><a href="http://www-03.ibm.com/servers/storage/"><font size=2 face="sans-serif">http://www-03.ibm.com/servers/storage/</font></a><font size=2 face="sans-serif"></font><br><br><br><br><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="sans-serif">From:
</font><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Dennis Appleyard <dennis.appleyard@oracle.com></font><br><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="sans-serif">To:
</font><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Ralph Weber <roweber@ieee.org>,
"Ballard, Curtis C (HP Storage)" <curtis.ballard@hpe.com>,
Darryl Torske <Darryl.Torske@quantum.com>, Kevin D Butt/Tucson/IBM@IBMUS</font><br><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="sans-serif">Cc:
</font><font size=1 face="sans-serif">"'t10@t10.org'"
<t10@t10.org></font><br><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="sans-serif">Date:
</font><font size=1 face="sans-serif">08/03/2016 18:01</font><br><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="sans-serif">Subject:
</font><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Comments on
incorporation of Tape Stream Mirroring 16-031r7 into SPC-5r11</font><br><hr noshade><br><br><br><tt><font size=2>Ralph, Kevin and all,<br><br>Below are my comments on the incorporation of Tape Stream Mirroring <br>proposal 16-031r7 into SPC-5r11.<br><br>Page 180 - In table 76 second row should be "COPY OPERATION CLOSE"
<br>rather than "COPY OPERATION ABORT"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 180 - In table 76 row SET TAPE STREAM MIRRORING should reference <br>"ADC-4 and SSC-5" rather than "ADC-4 or SSC-5"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 200 - In 5) remove "the" before "RECEIVE COPY STATUS
commands"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I think
it would be better to make commands singular. But, I agree that either
"the" needs removed or "commands" should be "command">></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 200 - In 7) remove "the" before "RECEIVE COPY STATUS
commands"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I think
it would be better to make commands singular. But, I agree that either
"the" needs removed or "commands" should be "command">></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 201 - In first sentence first paragraph of 5.18.7.2 change <br>"described in SSC-5 or ADC-4" to "described in SSC-5
and ADC-4"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 204 - In segment descriptor 19h row - "affects" should be
"effects"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 280 - Vertical lines missing in table 142 byte 8.</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 281 - In fourth paragraph "THIRD PARTY DEVICE ERROR FAILURE"
should <br>be "THIRD PARTY DEVICE FAILURE"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 281 - In fourth paragraph first sentence change "then the copy
<br>manager shall and device server shall establish" to "then the
copy <br>manager and device server shall establish" or "then the copy
manager <br>shall direct the device server to establish"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I think
the correct text should be, "then the copy manager shall direct the
device server to establish">></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Page 281 - In paragraph 8 "tape mirror copy destination" should
be "tape <br>stream mirroring copy destination"</font></tt><br><font size=2 color=#800080 face="Calibri"><b><<kdbutt: I agree>></b></font><tt><font size=2><br><br>Dennis<br><br><br><br><br><br></font></tt><br><br><BR>