[T10] Comments on incorporation of Tape Stream Mirroring 16-031r7 into SPC-5r11

Ralph Weber roweber at ieee.org
Mon Aug 8 02:17:04 PDT 2016


With the following exceptions, the changes described below have been 
marked for inclusion in SPC-5 r12.

  * For the two items in the list on page 200, the plural "commands"
    will be changed to singular.
  * The page 281 change is covered in a separate email.

All the best,

.Ralph


On 8/4/2016 1:18 PM, Kevin D Butt wrote:
> *comments inline below offset by <<kdbutt: >>*
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> Kevin D. Butt
> SCSI Architect, Tape Firmware, CAMSS
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> From: Dennis Appleyard <dennis.appleyard at oracle.com>
> To: Ralph Weber <roweber at ieee.org>, "Ballard, Curtis C (HP Storage)" 
> <curtis.ballard at hpe.com>, Darryl Torske <Darryl.Torske at quantum.com>, 
> Kevin D Butt/Tucson/IBM at IBMUS
> Cc: "'t10 at t10.org'" <t10 at t10.org>
> Date: 08/03/2016 18:01
> Subject: Comments on incorporation of Tape Stream Mirroring 16-031r7 
> into SPC-5r11
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> Ralph, Kevin and all,
>
> Below are my comments on the incorporation of Tape Stream Mirroring
> proposal 16-031r7 into SPC-5r11.
>
> Page 180 - In table 76 second row should be "COPY OPERATION CLOSE"
> rather than "COPY OPERATION ABORT"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 180 - In table 76 row SET TAPE STREAM MIRRORING should reference
> "ADC-4 and SSC-5" rather than "ADC-4 or SSC-5"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 200 - In 5) remove "the" before "RECEIVE COPY STATUS commands"
> *<<kdbutt: I think it would be better to make commands singular. But, 
> I agree that either "the" needs removed or "commands" should be 
> "command">>*
>
> Page 200 - In 7) remove "the" before "RECEIVE COPY STATUS commands"
> *<<kdbutt: I think it would be better to make commands singular. But, 
> I agree that either "the" needs removed or "commands" should be 
> "command">>*
>
> Page 201 - In first sentence first paragraph of 5.18.7.2 change
> "described in SSC-5 or ADC-4" to  "described in SSC-5 and ADC-4"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 204 - In segment descriptor 19h row - "affects" should be "effects"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 280 - Vertical lines missing in table 142 byte 8.
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 281 - In fourth paragraph "THIRD PARTY DEVICE ERROR FAILURE" should
> be "THIRD PARTY DEVICE FAILURE"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Page 281 - In fourth paragraph first sentence change "then the copy
> manager shall and device server shall establish" to "then the copy
> manager and device server shall establish" or "then the copy manager
> shall direct the device server to establish"
> *<<kdbutt: I think the correct text should be, "then the copy manager 
> shall direct the device server to establish">>*
>
> Page 281 - In paragraph 8 "tape mirror copy destination" should be "tape
> stream mirroring copy destination"
> *<<kdbutt: I agree>>*
>
> Dennis
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