X3T10 comment resolution for SSA-PH1
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scheible at vnet.ibm.com
Wed Feb 28 20:06:48 PST 1996
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Accredited Standards Committee
X3, Information Processing Systems
Doc: X3T10/96-131r0
Date: February 28, 1996
Project: X3T10.1/1145D
Ref Doc.: SSA-PH1 rev 8
Reply to: John Scheible
To: X3T10 Membership
From: John Scheible
Subject: X3T10 comment resolution on SSA-PH1 rev 8 (96-008)
AMP Comments on SSA-PH1 attached to Yes ballot (transcribed by John
Lohmeyer)
AMP-1) Comment #1. pg. 6, Fig 3 Test Points, Node Port Driver M1
Connector, Node Port Receiver M4 Connector
M1 & M4 are not necessarily external connectors, therefore 2 more
test points need to be identified at the external connectors.
Test points are defined in the specification from the driver to
the receiver & not at the external connectors. Need to break up
the specification & specify it at the external connectors because
that's where all the external "cable assy houses" have control
over.
RESPONSE: Accepted as a rewrite of clause 7.5 (in rev 8a). The
test points specify the requirements of the entire Complex Port
Connection, without a separate budget for the external cable.
Add the following implementers note following paragraph 2 of
clause 7.5.3 in rev 8a (Complex Port Connection).
Implementer's note x: It is the responsibility of the system
integrater to work with their suppliers to insure the Complex
Port Connection meets the requirements of SSA-PH1.
An explaination is as follows:
The SSA-PH1 document does not specify a different requirement at
the internal device connector from that at the external enclosure
connector because there are means offered to use the same
requirements at both connectors. Unfortunately Rev 8 did not
include these means explicitly but the intent is to use the same
requirements for both the internal and external connectors (or
any other connectors deemed to be interoperable junction points
in the port connection path).
In order to achieve this condition one either needs cables with
negligible signal degradation between the internal and external
connectors or one needs to use port connection coupler circuits
(retiming repeaters for example) at the affected connectors. The
requirements on the cable assemblies are governed by performance
specifications and multiple cable assemblies are allowed within
the same port connection. This means that SSA cable assemblies
usually need to be better than the minimum requirements to allow
for such complex connections. A short internal cable assembly is
a minor perturbation if it meets the transmission line properties
specified for all cable assemblies. The choice of external or
internal connectors is arbitrary. The implementer must choose
the interoperable junction points in his market or system.
AMP-2) Figure 18
The 5.62 dimension should go to datum F as called out in the IEEE
1394 specification. 5.62 +/- 0.05 should go to datum F.
RESPONSE: Accepted
Digital Comments on SSA-PH1 attached to No ballot
Digital voted "No" on the referenced letter ballot for a number of
technical and editorial reasons. Even though Digital is intimately
involved in the editing of this document some critical content is not
present in rev 8. Some of this content was formally approved by the
plenary for inclusion in the letter ballot. Other content has
developed in recent SSA working groups and through other oversights.
The following changes were approved by the December 13, 1995 plenary
to be incorporated into SSA-PH1 Rev 8:
1) Move connector performance requirements to normative annexes
2) Add figures describing line segments, port connections, port
connection segments, port connection couplers, and complex port
connections
3) Change line segment termination requirements to use 750 ps rise
time instead of slew rates
4) Move equalizer requirements to cable assembly section
Item 1 was incorporated in rev 8.
Item 2 was not done in Rev 8. Item 2 constitutes important
architectural technical content concerning the physical link.
Item 3 was not done in rev 8. Item 3 constitutes important technical
requirements for the line segment termination requirements.
Item 4 was not done in rev 8. The statements relating to equalization
are technically in error in its present location in rev 8 under
complex port connections.
I will attempt to draft proposal wording and figures to address these
comments before the next plenary meeting.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Digital provided input to Rev 8a for all the
points not covered in Rev 8.
DEC-1) New technical information concerning the requirements for
line segment termination has shown that the specifications under
section 7.3 are not valid. It is necessary to incorporate
exceptions to the impedance limits for certain time duration's in
order to allow existing devices to comply.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Rev 8a contains the correct information
DEC-2) There are numerous instances where the terminology in Item 2
is not incorporated into rev 8.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Rev 8a incorporates these changes
DEC-3) Annex G does not contain the information developed in Botley
relating to printed wiring board design.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Include 96a126r0.
DEC-4) Line fault detection is not a required feature of SSA but is
listed as an "essential feature" in section 1.1.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Clause 1.1 has been rewritten in rev 8a to
include only essential characteristics of SSA-PH1.
DEC-5) Several statements in section 1.1 are not supported by
statements in the body of the document. While these statements
may be true for some implementations they are not "essential
characteristics" of the technology described in SSA-PH1.
RESPONSE: Accepted, Clause 1.1 has been rewritten in rev 8a to
include only essential characteristics of SSA-PH1.
DEC-6) Changes are required to Figure 1 to extend the line driver
and line receiver to the connector.
RESPONSE: Accepted. Figure 1 is modified in Rev 8a.
DEC 7) The difference between Table 4 and Table 5 is not clear.
The terms "test" and "operating" need some explanation.
RESPONSE: Accepted, clarifying text is added to rev 8a.
DEC-8) The difference between Table 7 and Table 8 is not clear.
The terms "test" and "operating" need some explanation.
RESPONSE: Accepted, clarifying text is added to rev 8a.
DEC-9) The colors need to be removed from fig 31.
RESPONSE: Accepted, rev 8a has a changed figure with the colors
removed.
DEC-10)Figure C.4 needs to have the term "Table 30" removed.
RESPONSE: Accepted rev 8a will have this figure changed.
DEC-11)There are several figures needed to accurately describe the
terms in item 2 above.
RESPONSE: Accepted Rev 8a includes these figures.
FSI Comments on SSA-PH1 attached to No ballot
Gary Stephens faxed the following comment (transcribed by John
Lohmeyer): "This standard provides too little functional improvement
to warrant its standardization. The 40 MB/S version provides the
correct level with SSA-S3P as a base. See note with SSA-TL1 and SSA-
S2P votes." The note Gary refers to says that "due to severe personal
events, a proper typed and numbered response was not possible. I will
attempt to do so before the March meeting."
RESPONSE: Thank you for your input. There are many companies
that feel otherwise.
IBM Comments on SSA-PH1 attached to Yes ballot
IBM-1) Some of the definition refinements from December meeting
were not included in the document.
RESPONSE: Accepted see DEC comments for actions.
Milligan (Seagate) Comments on SSA-PH1 attached to No ballot
SEA-1) The patent statement has been useful information for the
committee participants. However now that the SSA-PH1 is being
forwarded, the patent statement should be replaced with the
standard X3 patent statement for the case where patent claims
have been made and offered in accordance with the ANSI patent
policy. In particular the specific citing of claims should be
removed.
I recognize that X3T11 has left such statements in some of their
forwarded standards. But this is inappropriate since the
committee should not take any position on the validity of the
claims made.
RESPONSE: Accepted, new patent statement incorporated
SEA-2) If an ISO/IEC submittal is intended, it would be preferable
(and necessary for the IS) to replace item (h) in Clause 2 and
the ANSI/EIA citations in Tables B.1 through B.7 with equivalent
IEC specifications.
RESPONSE: Deferred, IEC 512 is a heavily modified version of
ANSI/EIA 364. Before going to ISO we plan to convert the
ANSI/EIA references to IEC 512 references. Since it is a non-
trivial exercise, it will not be done prior to public review.
SEA-3) It is not acceptable to include "??" as normative reference.
RESPONSE: Accepted, the proper references and titles will be
added. Also references in Table C.4 (BP3 and BP5) were incorrect
and have been modified.
Editorial comments that are technical changes
EDI-1) Corrections are needed to Annex C to clarify certain
connector tests.
RESPONSE: Make the following changes:
1) Change 5000 insertions to 500 insertions in tests BP2, BP5 and
DP1.
2) Replace the maximum resferences of 35 m and 20 m to the following
"Maximum 15 m change from initial contact resistence measured in Table
C.2 test P3." in tests AP5, AP6, AP13, BP4, CP3 and DP3.
3) Remove test BP5.5 in Table C.4
4) Change part reference of BP3 to part 11 and add the document to
the normative references.
Sincerely,
John Scheible
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