I received feedback from Paul Entzel, Dave Peterson, and Gerry Houlder related to these proposals for a tape end-to-end data protection.
This feedback resulted in updates to the Presentation introducing the proposal and significant changes to the proposal (added better explanations and removed several less desired options)

Please see:
SSC-3: Tape end-to-end data protection(Presentation)
   http://www.t10.org/ftp/t10/document.07/07-373r1.pdf
SSC-3: Tape end-to-end data protection(Proposal)
   http://www.t10.org/ftp/t10/document.07/07-374r1.pdf

Thanks,

Kevin D. Butt
SCSI & Fibre Channel Architect, Tape Firmware
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