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Should all SBC-2 be SBC-3 instead?

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Revision 05 s/b Revision 06

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Global - We've got references all over the place. We have references to SAM-3,SAM-4, SBC-2, SBC-3, SPC-3 and SPC-4, SAS-1.1, SAS-2. Very confusing. Suggest using latest: SAM-4 - thru LB SPC-4 is stable \ SBC-3 going to LB soon SAS-2 in LB resolution

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Global Wherever possible the lat\ est versions of standards should be referenced \(e.g., SBC-2 s/b SBC-3, SPC-3 s/b SPC-4\). This appears to have already been done for SAM-4.

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Revision 05 s/b Revision 06<\ /span>

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22 June 2008 is incorrect

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Revision 6

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This should be << SCSI Block Commands-3 \(SBC-3\) and SCSI Primary Commands-4 \(SPC-4\) standards >>

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SBC-2 s/b SBC-3

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SPC-3 s/b SPC-4

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insert "other"

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Figure numbering is messed up in Figure Table. Multiple 8,9,10

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Numbering of figures should be sequential

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The revision history needs to be removed in the final version.

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Remove Revision History prior to forwarding.

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Add dates to R.5 and R.6 and future \ revision history headers

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Mark Evans, Vice-Chair

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George O. Penokie, Vice-Chair s/b Mark Evans, Vice-Chair

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host-based software or firmware

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perform

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Add T10 Membership list

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Insert list of committee members

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SCSI Primary Commands-4 a

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SCSI Block Commands-3

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Clause 6 is titled Command Management Model, seems confusing.

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Annex A describes the INQUIRY command translation for ATAPI devices. s/b Annex A describes the translation for ATAPI devices.

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The description of Annex A in the I\ ntroduction does not match the contents of Annex A.

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command

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SPC-4, and SBC-3 standards

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It looks like there is no space between the I and the /. This needs to be fixed.

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SPC-3, and SBC-2 s/b SPC-4 a\ nd SBC-3

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SPC-3, and SBC-2 s/b SPC-4, and SBC-3

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2006 s/b 2008 \(or 2009\)

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While this is true today, this shortly will no longer be true. Suggest replacing this with another suitable example \(such as a defined limited queue depth for ATA that does not exist for SCSI\).

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Delete all the "i.e.,"s fr\ om figure 2. That is not used for acronyms in parenthesis - just the acronym is fine, like "\(ATA8-ACS\)"

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Should the SCSI Architecture Model box stop at SAT?

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Delete i.e., in figure 3 \(see reaso\ ning in comment on figure 2\)

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Replace all references to SPC-3 with SPC-4 within this standard.

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Replace all references to SBC-2 with SBC-3 within this standard.

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Replace all references to SAS-1.1 with SAS-2 within this standard.

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SAS-2 needs to be added to this list.

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Following global comment on using SAM-4, SPC-4 and SBC-3, remove Approved References: ATA-7, since its based on 8 according to above, SAM-3, SPC-3, SBC-2 Also SAS-2 missing, but referenced in definitions SA\ M-2 ok, because of non autosense reference.

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Include the planned ISO/IEC numbers \ for the ATA8 documents

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Approved s/b lowercase &\ #13;\(or b\) and c\) should also start capitalized\)

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Delete ISO/IEC 14776-413, SCSI A\ rchitecture Model - 3 \(SAM-3\) [ANSI INCITS 402-2005] and upgrade all references to SAM-4

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SAM-4 has an ANSI INCITS number now,\ so the T10 project number can be replaced. The international ISO/IEC 14776-414 is still "under development" so don't move this into 2.2.

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Delete ISO/IEC 14776-151, Serial Attached SCSI - 1.1 \(SAS-1.1\) [ANSI INCITS 417-2006] and upgrade all SAS-1.1 references to SAS-2

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Delete ISO/IEC 14776-322, SCSI B\ lock Commands - 2 \(SBC-2\) [ANSI INCITS 405-2005] and upgrade all SBC-2 references to SBC-3, which should be nearing completion

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Delete ISO/IEC 14776-453, SCSI \ Primary Commands - 3 \(SPC-3\) [ANSI INCITS 408-2005] and upgrade all SPC-3 references to SPC-4

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Add FCP-3 \(or FCP-4\), as that is u\ sed in some example figures and text.

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Do we have any references to the USB\ -BOT standard?

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The BOT document is not \(or no longer referenced except in a definition that is the subject of a separate comment\).

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All of this << calculated as two times the value returned in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data words 118:117 \(see ATA8-ACS\) if the ATA device returns a value of one in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data word 106 bit 12 \(i.e., the ATA \ device supports the Long Logical Sector feature set\). The size of an ATA Logical Sector is 512 bytes if the ATA device returns a value of zero in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data word 106 bit 12 \(i.e., the ATA device does not support the Long Logical Sector fea\ ture set\). >>should be describe in the main body of the text not part of the definition.

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SPC-3 s/b SPC-4

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SPC-3 s/b SPC-4

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through s/b over

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\(global\) For cross-refere\ nces in definitions that apply to the entire defined term, use "xxx. See SPC-3." format. Use "\(see SPC-3\)" format just for references for the words preceding it in the sentence."

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compliant with

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\(see 5.7\)

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This note << NOTE 1 - The Logical Sector >> should be describe in the main body of the text not part of the definition.

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This << represented in words; therefore, the number >> should be << represented in words, therefore, the number >>. The semicolon is changed to a comma.

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All of this << returned in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data words \(103:100\) minus one if the ATA device returns a value of one in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data word 86 bit 10 \(i.e., the ATA device supports the 48-bit address fea\ ture set\), or the total number of user addressable sectors returned in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data words \(61:60\) minus one if the ATA device returns a value of zero in ATA IDENTIFY DEVICE data word 86 bit 10 \(i.e., the ATA device does not support the 48-\ bit address feature set\) \(see ATA8-ACS\), >>should be describe in the main body of the text not part of the definition.

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address s/b Address

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address s/b Address

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address s/b Address

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QUEUED s/b QUEUED command

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EXT \( s/b EXT command \(

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EXT\), s/b EXT command\),

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QUEUED \(see s/b QUEUED command \(see

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Rejected set by moverby

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Why is this different than SAM-4 definition? How is this an object?

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SPC-3 s/b SPC-4

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\(see ATA8-ACS\). s/b \(see SATA-2.6\). Most NCQ related material in this standard refer to SAS 2.6

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After LUN definition, add "See \ SAM-4."

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It appears that the READ \(32\), WRITE \(32\), VERIFY \(32\), WRITE AND VERIFY \(32\) are not here. Is that intentional or should they be added.

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layer

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layer s/b Layer

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SPC-3 s/b SPC-4

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