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Global: I think we have a p\ roblem with the generic term "zone permission table". We have several "zone permission tables" defined: - Current - Shadow - Default - Saved Collectively, all 4 of these may be referred to "zone permissio\ n tables". I think most current usages are intended to be "current zone permission table". There are also 2 instance of "active zone permission table", which is undefined and I think really are "current zone\ permission table". This same concern applies to the term "active values". The most obvious changes to me are: 1\) Use "active" instead of "current" throughout when referring to zoning permissi\ on tables and zone manager password \(I counted 25 occurrences that would need to be changed\). 2\) add "active" qualifier added to several instances of "zone permission table".
)/Type/Annot/Popup 3 0 R/Page 0>> endobj 6 0 obj<> endobj 7 0 obj<The CONFIGURING bit is \(unfortunate\ ly\) overloaded by both zoning and the self-discovery process. There are several cases like: ....shall set the CONFIGURING bit to zero when... \ ;That is not correct behavior when both processes are outstanding.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 6 0 R/Page 0>> endobj 9 0 obj<> endobj 10 0 obj<REJECT \(The hard reset sequence - a\ link reset sequence with a HARD_RESET primitive - sends a SCSI "hard reset" to an end device \(target or initiator\). That's the deepest reset available in the protocol. Expanders ignore it; there is no sequence you can send to one phy of an \ expander to mess up all the other phys. Resetting an embedded SES logical unit inside an expander might have the effect of resetting the switch functionality as well \(that's vendor-specific\)\) At the enterprise level there is a need to have an \ attached SAS device perform a deep reset, where all device software or firmware is re-initialised. [Typically in this scenario, enterprise would ask for a debug dump to be taken for future analysis too.] This would equate to a reset at the protocol level.\ This reset should apply to all devices, expanders, drives etc. I don't see how is this done in SAS?
)/Type/Annot/Popup 9 0 R/Page 0/BE<>>> endobj 12 0 obj<> endobj 13 0 obj<At the enterprise level and possibly\ for other environments, there is also a need to specify behaviour for EPOW. SAS seems to have no method of indicating EPOW to devices, potentially leaving disk systems with 'damaged' sectors that will then fail on array rebuilds, causing data loss. This \ is unacceptable for the enterprise market and some method of signalling EPOW is required.
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 15 0 R/Page 0/BE<>>> endobj 18 0 obj<> endobj 19 0 obj<Author \ Total comments: | Accept - Done: | | Accept - Todo: | | | Accept - Last: | | | | Accept \(only\): \ | | | | | Reject - Todo: | | | | | | Reject \(only\): | | | | | | | Refer PHY: | | | | | | | | Refe\ r PROTOCOL: | | | | | | | | | Refer - Vote: | | | | | | | | | | Refer: | | | | | | | | | | | Todo \(only\)\ : | | | | | | | | | | | | Total worked: | | | | | | | | | | | | | Left: Chapter 0: 19 5 1 0 0 0 8 0 0 0 0 \ 0 14 5 Chapter 1: 5 1 3 0 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 Chapter 10: 271 100 0 0 0 0 56 0 5 0 0 1 162 109 Chapter 11: 21 10 0 0 0 0 7 0 0 0 0 0 \ 17 4 Chapter 12: 90 18 0 0 0 0 0 3 0 0 0 0 21 69 Chapter 13: 21 5 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 0 0 10 11 Chapter 2: 10 2 5 0 0 0 2 0 0 0 0 0 9\ 1 Chapter 3: 167 82 0 0 0 0 28 0 1 0 0 0 111 56 Chapter 4: 316 170 0 0 0 1 75 0 14 0 0 3 263 53 Chapter 5: 295 27 0 0 0 0 54 1 0 0 0 2 84 21\ 1 Chapter 6: 241 49 0 0 0 0 92 0 1 0 0 0 142 99 Chapter 7: 507 166 2 0 0 0 105 0 3 0 0 0 276 231 Chapter 8: 41 13 0 0 0 0 9 0 0 0 0 1 23 18\ 13; Chapter 9: 188 65 0 0 0 0 5 0 1 0 0 2 73 115 RElliott: 178 151 0 0 0 0 0 0 7 0 0 0 158 20 elx-bmartin: 66 28 0 0 0 0 7 0 2 0 0 0 37 29 \ elx-nayalasomayajula: 2 0 0 0 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 1 1 hpq-bolawsky: 15 5 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 10 hpq-curtisb: 1 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 0 \ hpq-relliott: 59 16 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 0 0 0 18 41 ibm-jay-diepenbrock: 4 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 4 ibm-pcashman: 2 0 0 0 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 1 1 ibm-s\ andy-shirk-heath: 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 ibm-steve-wallace: 4 1 0 0 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 2 2 ibm-ted-vojnovich: 4 0 0 0 0 0 1 0 1 0 0 0 2 2 \ ifx-hnewman: 9 1 0 0 0 0 2 0 0 0 0 0 3 6 intc-mseidel: 46 8 0 0 0 0 11 1 0 0 0 0 20 26 ktek-dmoore: 16 8 1 0 0 0 2 0 1 0 0 0 12 4 l\ si-bbesmer: 86 30 0 0 0 0 7 0 2 0 0 2 41 45 lsi-bday: 81 25 0 0 0 0 12 0 1 0 0 0 38 43 lsi-gpenokie: 519 160 7 0 0 0 132 1 2 0 0 4 306 213 lsi-\ jenkins: 16 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 16 mxim-kwitt: 46 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 45 mxim-mbari: 14 2 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 12 pmcs-gfo\ rtin: 33 4 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 4 29 pmcs-rhernandez: 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 pmcs-tsymons: 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 relliot\ t: 91 84 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 84 7 stx-alvin-cox: 26 3 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 23 stx-ghoulder: 148 39 3 0 0 0 26 0 7 0 0 2 77 71 wdc-mevans: \ 723 146 0 0 0 1 244 2 0 0 0 1 394 329 ---------------- Total comments: 2192 Accept - Done: 713 \(32.53%\) Accept - Last: 0 \(0.00%\) Accept - Todo: 11 \(0.50%\) Accept \(only\): 0 \(0.00%\) Reject - \ Todo: 1 \(0.05%\) Reject \(only\): 447 \(20.39%\) Refer PHY: 4 \(0.18%\) Refer PROTOCOL: 25 \(1.14%\) Refer - Vote: 0 \(0.00%\) Refer: 0 \(0.00%\) Todo \(only\): 9 \(0.41%\) Total worked: 1210 \(55.20%\)\ 13; Left: 982 \(44.80%\)
)/Type/Annot/Popup 18 0 R/Page 0>> endobj 21 0 obj<> endobj 22 0 obj<Is SAS always intended to be compatible with SATA physical interconnect? There are issues of keying, and perhaps there are conditions for some blocks that don't support SATA 6G that may not meet their performanc\ e. It is a goal, but SATA 6G is a moving target.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 21 0 R/Page 2>> endobj 24 0 obj<> endobj 25 0 obj<REJECT \(the wraparound are all reas\ onably formatted in the table. FrameMaker has been known to have anomolies where it doesn't place the page number on the right any more, but that is not the case here\) Fix long section names so that the wrap-around does not clutter the page \ number portion.
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 60 0 R/Page 48>> endobj 63 0 obj<> endobj 64 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(split SBC into its o\ wn box, and added SAT-2 and ATA8-ACS above it. Also see lsi-bbesmer comment in 2.3\) Should SAT be included in this? SAT-2 Figure 3 indicates how SAT fits in overall.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 63 0 R/Page 50>> endobj 66 0 obj<> endobj 67 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) I don't think putting an unknown standard here is a good idea. It looks like a TBD. Either delete it or get a real number. IEC xxxxx-xxx
)/Type/Annot/Popup 66 0 R/Page 51>> endobj 69 0 obj<> endobj 70 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) I don't think putting an unknown standard here is a good idea. It looks like a TBD. Either delete it or get a real number. ISO/IEC xxxxx-xxx
)/Type/Annot/Popup 69 0 R/Page 51>> endobj 72 0 obj<> endobj 73 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) ATA8-AAM and ATA8-ACS do not have correct ISO/IEC numbers.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 72 0 R/Page 51>> endobj 75 0 obj<> endobj 76 0 obj<REJECT \(The SAS physical layer is t\ he physical interconnect used for STP, which carries ATA.\) this standard What part of this standard defines the ATA physical interconnect?
)/Type/Annot/Popup 75 0 R/Page 51>> endobj 78 0 obj<> endobj 79 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) I don't think putting an unknown standard here is a good idea. It looks like a TBD. Either delete it or get a real number. ISO/IEC xxxxx-xxx,
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 81 0 R/Page 52>> endobj 84 0 obj<> endobj 85 0 obj<REJECT \(SATA IO is an industry cons\ ortium, not an accredited standards body. That's why references to it go in the "Other references" section, not the "Normative references" section. Thus, it doesn't fit in this list as currently worded.\) Should this table i\ nclude the SATA IO organization?
)/Type/Annot/Popup 84 0 R/Page 52>> endobj 87 0 obj<> endobj 88 0 obj<REJECT \(physical layer engineers ha\ ve not complained\). the FC Port terminology used within MJSQ should be substituted with SAS phy terminology. s/b [There should be more about how to do this, at the very least a couple of "e.g."s would be helpful.]
)/Type/Annot/Popup 87 0 R/Page 52>> endobj 90 0 obj<> endobj 91 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) xxxxx-xxx This is incorrect ISO number.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 90 0 R/Page 52>> endobj 93 0 obj<> endobj 94 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(waiting on real numb\ er from T13\) xxxxx-xxx, This is incorrect ISO number.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 93 0 R/Page 52>> endobj 96 0 obj<> endobj 97 0 obj<ACCEPT - TODO \(check figures. This\ is leftover from when SATA was multiple specifications - SATA-1, SATA-2 extensions, SATA port selector, etc. It also does help differentiate references to the SATA specification from SATA overall. However, that nuance seems unnecessary. Replaced SATA-2\ with SATA everywhere. Changed "defined by SATA \(see SAS-2\)" to "defined by SATA".\) SATA-2 s/b SATA rev 2.6 Global change. The SATA-IO organization says there is no such thing as SATA-2 and does not want the term used. Ma\ ybe a definition of "SATA" equals "Serial ATA 2.6" in this standard and make a global change of SATA-2 to SATA.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 96 0 R/Page 53>> endobj 99 0 obj<> endobj 100 0 obj<Should StatEye \(www.stateye.org\) n\ eed to be added to the list of other references?
)/Type/Annot/Popup 99 0 R/Page 53>> endobj 102 0 obj<> endobj 103 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(only standards that \ are referenced go here; SAT is not currently referenced. Since almost all SAS initiators include a SATL, though, it should be. Added "ISO/IEC 14776-922, SCSI/ATA Translation-2 \(SAT-\ 2\) \(T10/1826-D\)" here, added SAT-2 to figure 1 showing SCSI standards, and added "A SCSI to ATA translation layer \(see SAT-2\) may be implemented to enable SCSI application clients to communica\ te with ATA devices." in 4.1.5.\) Add SAT-2 to this list?
)/Type/Annot/Popup 102 0 R/Page 53>> endobj 105 0 obj<> endobj 106 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(keeping the parenthe\ tical term, which is needed for references\) Serial ATA 2.6 \(SATA-2\). s/b Serial ATA Revision 2.6.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 105 0 R/Page 53>> endobj 108 0 obj<> endobj 109 0 obj<>)/M(D:20080328102705-05'00')/T(lsi-gpenokie)/Subj(Highlight)/QuadPoints[185.88 365.35 257.018 365.35 185.88 352.08 257.018 352.08]/RC(If you insist on all things be cross referenced then there needs to be one here . << An object that is >>
)/Type/Annot/Popup 108 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 111 0 obj<> endobj 112 0 obj<I have pointed out a few missing cross-references to other glossary entries. I question the benefits of adding in cross-references to within section 3.1.xx as is see on way to get them all. I recommend removing them all.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 111 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 114 0 obj<> endobj 115 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE Train-SNW \ ;s/b SNW-1, SNW-2, or Final-SNW
)/Type/Annot/Popup 114 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 117 0 obj<> endobj 118 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(and moved earlier in\ the sentence\) \(see 6.7.4.2.3.4\). s/b 6.7.4.2.3.2
)/Type/Annot/Popup 117 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 120 0 obj<> endobj 121 0 obj<task file registers s/b fiel\ ds [this is how they are defined in ATA8-ACS]
)/Type/Annot/Popup 120 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 123 0 obj<> endobj 124 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(Moved this one earli\ er after "Train-SNW". The algorithm is: if the reference applies to the whole term, a new See x.y sentence is added. If the reference is for some of the words in the sentence, it goes in the sentence after those words.\) \(see 6.7.4.2.\ 3.4\). Make see references at the end of definitions consistent either \(see x.y\) or See x.y.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 123 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 126 0 obj<> endobj 127 0 obj<a s.b. the a implies any zoning expander, while this refers to the zone manager that locked the zoning expander device that is being referenced.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 126 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 129 0 obj<> endobj 130 0 obj<A storage peripheral \(analogous to a SCSI target device\). Clarify this as a storage device that processes requests originated by an ATA host.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 129 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 132 0 obj<> endobj 133 0 obj<"jitter, bounded uncorrellated \(BUJ\)" should appear in the list of definitions.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 132 0 R/Page 54>> endobj 135 0 obj<> endobj 136 0 obj<> endobj 138 0 obj<> endobj 139 0 obj<The definition for ALT does not conform to that in Table 95. Table 95 is correct.
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 141 0 R/Page 55>> endobj 144 0 obj<> endobj 145 0 obj<REJECT \(without the comma, could be\ interpreted as \(A that differ from \(B divided by C\)\). It needs to be interpreted as \(\(A that differ from B\) divided by C\).\) bits, divided s/b bits divided
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 147 0 R/Page 55>> endobj 150 0 obj<> endobj 151 0 obj<The directive "See MJSQ." is not well-defined in this context. It should point to a section number \("See MJSQ in 2.2."\). There are other occurrences of this phrase in the standard.
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 162 0 R/Page 56>> endobj 165 0 obj<> endobj 166 0 obj<> should be expressed mathematically.)/M(D:20080420121110-05'00')/T(lsi-gpenokie)/Subj(Highlight)/QuadPoints[238.679 143.034 292.616 143.034 238.679 131.055 292.616 131.055]/RC(REJECT \(This is mathematically wron\ g, and should be "Twenty times". Fixed it that way.\) This << one-twentieth >> should be expressed mathematically.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 165 0 R/Page 56>> endobj 168 0 obj<> endobj 169 0 obj<from a peer higher layer state machi\ ne. s/b from a peer higher layer state machine in a different SCSI device.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 168 0 R/Page 56>> endobj 171 0 obj<> endobj 172 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE \(keeping note 6 as a \ note. If definitions get too long, people complain. I don't want to create a whole section defining decibel, but do want to include the equations for power and voltage and some explanation of why 10 and 20 are used at different times, so a long note seems\ like a good compromise\) A dB is ten times the common log of the power ratio, not one-tenth. It also should incorporate Note 6.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 171 0 R/Page 56>> endobj 174 0 obj<> endobj 175 0 obj<> endobj 177 0 obj<> endobj 178 0 obj<REJECT \(see comment on dB\) \ 3;Notes 7 and 8 should be incorporated into the definitions of dBmv and dBm.
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 183 0 R/Page 56>> endobj 186 0 obj<> endobj 187 0 obj<> should be << electronics or electrical equipment. >>)/M(D:20080328102705-05'00')/T(lsi-gpenokie)/Subj(Highlight)/QuadPoints[318.292 146.35 460.532 146.35 318.292 133.08 460.532 133.08]/RC(This << electronics/electrical equipment. >> should be << electronics or electrical equipment. >>
)/Type/Annot/Popup 186 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 189 0 obj<> endobj 190 0 obj<This implies dword is only on the re\ ceive path. Also applies prior to 8b10b encoding \(ie. when transmitting a dword\).
)/Type/Annot/Popup 189 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 192 0 obj<> endobj 193 0 obj<REJECT \(who else's could it be? Th\ ere are no other nouns in the sentence that could be thought of as having a buffer.\) its s.b. the receiver's
)/Type/Annot/Popup 192 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 195 0 obj<> endobj 196 0 obj<REJECT \(cannot separate process...t\ o discover with a comma - that changes the meaning.\) The process performed by a management application client to discover all the SAS devices \(see 3.1.197\) and expander devices \(see 3.1.77\) in the SAS domain \(see 3.1.198\) that invokes the \ configuration subprocess \(see 3.1.35\) as needed. See 4.7. add comas as shown The process performed by a management application client, to discover all the SAS devices \(see 3.1.197\) and expander devices \(see 3.1.77\) in the SAS domain \(s\ ee 3.1.198\), that invokes the configuration subprocess \(see 3.1.35\) as needed. See 4.7.
)/Type/Annot/Popup 195 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 198 0 obj<> endobj 199 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE milliWatts\ 3;s/b milliwatts per SI brochure
)/Type/Annot/Popup 198 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 201 0 obj<> endobj 202 0 obj<ACCEPT - DONE it s/b\ 3;that the expander phy to match wdc-mevans comments on subtractive and table routing attributes
)/Type/Annot/Popup 201 0 R/Page 57>> endobj 204 0 obj<> endobj 205 0 obj<REJECT \(Broadcast is capitalized ev\ erywhere, including when it is used as part of the name of an object.\) Broadcast -- why is this capitalized but none of the other objects within an expander are capitalized?
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)/Type/Annot/Popup 225 0 R/Page 59>> endobj 228 0 obj<> endobj 229 0 obj<REJECT \(fields can be 1 bit, and in\ some standards there are tables with "Field" headers that list both 1-bit and multi-bit fields. Not sure if SAS does that right now, but it should be able to.\) one s.b. two We never refer to a one bit field, we alway\ s refer to that as a bit.
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